Haiku 237 by Melba Christie

Why do they flee?

They long to see what

freedom looks like up close

Tears retreat!

Image by kalhh from Pixabay


7 responses to “Haiku 237 by Melba Christie”

  1. Laughing_Soul Avatar

    How are the syllables divided here, didn’t figure out the 575

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    1. Melba Christie at Poemattic Avatar

      I may have added a couple of syllables. You are right. Thanks.

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      1. Laughing_Soul Avatar

        Though love reading you and this was great

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        1. Melba Christie at Poemattic Avatar

          Thanks! What else can I expect from a “Laughing Soul”. I love the title of your blog and what you write.

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          1. Laughing_Soul Avatar

            Awww thank you so much, this means a lot. ❤Been really low and you made me smile 🤗

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              1. Laughing_Soul Avatar

                Thank you. ❤ Cya tomo.. Gd night

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